Feeling: dejected
sry i havn't been on in awhile. i luv writing!!- here's a poem i made up by myself
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My life
The earth going around the sun
Causes the light to rise and set
I awake when it is dim
And sit in bed until time seems to stop
I think about how today will go
Or how yesterday went
I think about my mistakes
And my achievements
The scale tips
My day
I rush to a place
Bearing physical and mental weights
Voices and ideas overlap
I cannot master life
Until I learn to find myself
Among the others that are
Echoing…
Just repeating…
As I fall deep into the abyss
My mind
The thoughts others think
Seem to push my own away
My mouth is no longer mine
But instead another’s
It lasts all day
Until I reach my sanctuary
Where I can filter out myself
From all the filth I picked up today
But something is not right…
My pain
The depression is overwhelming
The sadness has no end
The loneliness has no equal
I have always felt this way
Ever since I had learned to think
To meditate, to learn, to be tempted
And to want
And to speak with my own voice
I am still empty
And I always will be...
thats so good did you write it?? well i made m the entry to you can read it if you want =)
Hey wassup? Thanks for the comment. I'm not really sure how changed my layout though. But anyway...thats a very cool poem. I write poetry too. I have one that is copyrighted and published in "The International Poets Society". You should try for that too. You seem like a talented person. The easiest way to do that is go to poetry.com. Its pretty cool. I think I just might post that poem if you'd like to read it. But anyway, I 'll check in later k?
that is a good one right there keep on writing. laters
I can do a cartwheel a round off n thats it i really can't do anything else. Hope u had a really great birthday.
Kaylee