poem

Feeling: cranky
rejected i was rejected, i was torn apart, my heart is broken now, i need some help, i'm afried, i want to be happy, but nothing has happened, i am sitting in a corner, listening to the frogs crook, my cloths are covered in blood, it won't stop, well we have to die sooner or later, at least i tried, i must go now, my heart will still be broken, but i will still try, even if get rejected again, i will keep going, good bye..... like?
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[Anonymous]

hi. you should make that into a song. It would work really well. did you write that? if so it was really good ad you have a good mind for poetry/ song writing. You should make up songs sometimes

thats an awsome poem they sound alot like one of my friends poems aka iloveagothboy check hers out

I like it!

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