Supporting My Lumbar Vertebrae

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I look into the mirror as soft eye-agitating puffs of talc whirl and fall dizzily like a little bicyclist, cowering because the guiding hand let go And I say nothing I have seen myself so many times before now but never so clearly no residue could tarnish my mind because I skinned my knees until they were raw and sped until it felt my feet would sprout wings...
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[Anonymous]

This is good.


Way better than the crap you used to write. You've really dropped the pretentious tone and it works out nicely.

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