The Purer the Intention, the Deeper the Wound
February 10, 2005
With outstretched arms I look above
At the darkened skies filled with blackened clouds
Clouds that promise a refreshing rain
A shower of purity covering the earth
With a clap of thunder the clouds split
And the fresh water begins its dance
Swiftly falling to the sun stroked earth
Rejuvenating the scorched ground
But something’s terribly wrong with this rain
For when it reaches my skin
It burns like iron fresh pulled from the flame
The purity burns along my tainted flesh
I open my mouth and let the acid pour
Down my throat to drown my lungs
And I choke up the bile that’s been there for weeks
The remnants of who I used to be
The water trails down the scars of my arm
Splitting the wounds like a blade of steel
Leaving behind a trail of blisters
A destructive course till it reaches the ground
The rain subsides and leaves me stranded
Lying broken and battered on a brand new earth
And the clouds disappear and reveal the sun
With its pulsing light revealing all of me
As I stay motionless, bleeding on the green, green grass
And let its rays soak up my tears
“Is this all I’ve been reduced to?â€
“Will I ever be whole again?â€
©
ya... i am in love with your layout...
ahhhhh....its awesome...
<3 mel
u wrote that?
w0w.
thas intense
<i>i prolly dont get it at all tho</i> :|
wats <b>m/</b> stand 4?
(<i>yea, sorry i ask alotta questions</i>)
xo*
ooh no way i see it now the m/ thing. thas so cool.
ok uMm...lol wat exactly does it all mean?
x0*
whoaaa.
thas sa-weet.
i like it even more.
dayum ur goood.
wow
xo*justine
Nirvana is awesome.
I'm glad you enjoyed my rant. =)
yes. you will be whole again. keep writing.
bright eyes is awsome... and i like your writing
yes, i write all the stuff on my diary...
thanks for the comment, i was just looking at your entries and i like a lot of the bands you have there, like brand new, and what i've heard of bayside i like...