Listening to: In Flames
You lay there anxiously
As poisonous serpents race through my heart
Cover it's grave with beautiful flowers.
Carve on it's tomb:
"In death we are together."
Not another moment, I can wait.
Writihing in the pain that is life's embrace,
When you are away,
Lifetimes go by in seconds.
I'm not done yet....but what do you think?
its gooooooood.
i dont really like the ending part, but everything else I like.
if you want a little constructive criticism.
=]
hm.
differentish.
the last two lines are a little weird, because the whole song is weird, and that just adds on.
wooh. good job, cathy.
it's hard to explain.
fo sho.