i wrote this for english class.......what do u think?
Leaving
I cant go back, I will not leave.
If I return, I admit defeat.
I need some space, some room to breathe;
I want to see where this road leads.
You’ve done this to me before
You forced me to go away
I had to leave it all behind
You didn’t listen to what I had to say
This time, however, it’s different.
I feel this is where I belong.
So again you’ve taken your cheap shot,
But you still pretend nothing’s wrong.
I know what goes on inside your mind
I am happy, which you don’t like.
I make friends, you ask to move.
You always do this, just out of spite.
thats pretty good..
ashits awsome!...im adding you so I can return when you do have poems...I love poems...mostly morbid ones..but any kind I like alot....
thats really good..post more..I love to see poems
I really liked your poem, it's very good. Well done!!
brandi i get it you wrote it for me. im sorry for every thing, i need you now more than ever.