I fall to the ground Then I can’t seem to do anything right, I can’t seem to make things right, I can’t seem to be right. I hurt myself I hurt others, I hurt everywhere I turn, I hurt to talk and to cry, I hurt when all I need is comfort. I try, I try more, I try until I realize I can't change anything anyways, I try yet I go no where. All I am is this girl, This girl that no one see, No one sees her because she is invisible, She is invisible because no one cares. So fallen I have, Hurt I am, Invisible I am, Yet all of these I hate to be. could you comment on it not about me or how i'm wrong or any of that, on how it's written. i kno its suxy, but could ya?