Shuttered eyes

Feeling: abnormal
"Shuttered Eyes" Life it self looks so kind, Yet its because you are so blind. As grounds tremble before you, And skies fall black, Bridges crumble, as does my lonesome heart. The planet is engulfed with no light, People scatter and become a fright. The end lurks upon us, As the people of the world embrace there fate. Half past dawn, The world drops dead. The cause of this is still unknown, Except for those who have suffered. A new day arises for us all, As we are cleansed for all our sins. We all come from the womb, But not all truthfully open their eyes.
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you like to write much?

O_o maddie

[Anonymous]

Kick poem!

[Anonymous]

hey, i like your journal, it looks pretty good, talk to you later, amie

it dissapears without change

you're forced to realize the mess you've made of myslef

tell me

you still remember how to look alive

kiss the thorns

that you seek

to help bleed away  

from the pain that never lets you sleep

and darkness falls from this face

all you dream is the wind pulls you

and the bottles set sail

from the mess you made of yourself-

~j!


i liked your poem made me want to write too. havent in a looong time

uh are you seriouse or are you just trying to be funny? i didnt call you amie...um ok..-amie

[Anonymous]

lol its ok. i havent taken steriods before...have fun! -amie

thanks..kewl!!

thank u for letting me know and all.... if u ever need to talk im here (shootme)

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