Stop breaking my broken heart
I can't bear to see you cry anymore
I wish my song was your remedy
But you just keep on crying
Keep on hiding
How can I kiss it and make it all better?
Look into my glazed eyes
I want to feel what you're feeling
We could die beautifully together if you wanted
Just let me know when you're sane.
Forget all the others and feed off my happiness
Hug me till the sun comes up
I promise you it'll never go down again
But only if you accept this gift I have to offer
Not finished yet...
♥ Bri
loll aww. me like it though. lol. lots of adjectives.
but its more like a story again. lol.
but i guess we can have some poem-like songs and some story-like songs. lol
but i like the start of it :D
On a scale of 1-10 so far, 9...It actually tells a story of how you want to understand someone whose going through a hard time, and everyone feels that emotion at one point and time in their lives...This has <b>GREAT</b> potential!! Keep workin on it :)