forever

this situation looks bad how will i overcome this silently deaths creeping up i shall fall this time never to rise and fight again my eyesight grows dim just bury me deep so i can't hear your screams i faed away more and more with each moment that passes this is the last time i'll take a bullet for you i did it to save you but now i'm dead this is my greatest mistake i've ever made funny how its my last i thought my first one was the worst deep into the ground they lay me for all of eternity but i can still hear your screams then i hear your whisper ::i'll love you forever:: i shed a tear cause i know its true then a fade away
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i love your writeing, its realy good. you have real talent :D


:P foreverinsane :P

you welcome xxx

Hey ben

you have angsty fourteen-year-olds commenting you

that have cutting pictures on their page

I think this is bad news, haha.

-dani.

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Lol i understood, just tryin to be funny, no need to use strong language:)

Well, i hope high school doesnt suck for me, i hate drama.

<darknessfalls

[Anonymous]