Bleeding Heart a poem i wrote

Feeling: dark
ight now, i dont think ne one else would either. cutewithout
You are Adam from the Cute Without the E (Cut from
the Team) video. You are dark and mysterious.

Which Adam of Taking Back Sunday are you?
brought to you by Quizilla Bleeding Heart I cut myself today, carved a heart to represnt the pain. I slit the razor right aganist my vein. The razor causes blood to pour, blood pours down lyke rain. The goal was to drain my heart so i become numb and incapable of feeling pain. Too many mistakes ive made for my life to take. My wish is to end it all with razors scaring my veins. I slowly fade away, My heart starts to race then slower and slower with each breath i take. Everything around me fades to black, my soul is forever free now theres no turnin back.-ME :::Lindsay::: *wut do u think be ?honest ( im editing it cuz i dont lyke it that much)
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you repeat too many words. yer trying too hard to rhyme. poems dont need to rhyme, and can still kik ass.

but i love it anywho.

good job

xoxo

guess. hah.

[Anonymous]
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yes, it's a good song.
nice poem, is it real?
blessings of the day to you
bloodnight
[Anonymous]

im good at honesty. one thing im actually good at. haha.

later.

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then i'm glad you're writing about what you understand. good luck, keep writing.
blessings of the day to you.
bloodnight
[Anonymous]

good poem! awesome sitD!

[xxidontcarenemorexx]

[Anonymous]

yeah, i know, that song kicks all ass :)

cya.


-Eddie-

[Anonymous]

Good peom!