still falling -7:52pm
Falling tears all around me
Laughter shouts and im lonely
Voices echo the dawning
Dew escapes and leaves the morning
I'm still falling...
Orchid dancing in the light
Weightless being takes flight
Tomorrow is still coming
I'm still ..constantly falling..
The Moon still sways in the night
He calls out to the stars,
"Where is my love?
The Sun never waits for me."
Weeping bitter sighs
"Take me back home, but I never,
I never feel fright."
Milky way still shines
Crystal still chimes
Babies still cry
World goes around
All your life
I'm still falling...
Just another night
I'm still falling...
No end in sight
Hey Jaclyn. I have to say this is a lovely piece of writing. Yeah, I really enjoyed it! Well, I hope I get to hear more from you!
-Sam
Hey I like the poem alot. It feels as if maybe I really understand what you were thinking. Bravo
wipes away the tears omg jac, that was so beatiful, that or I'm a sap.
That was... wow... really good.
Reminds me a lot of me too... a bit. Yah anyways, that was good. Good job. Now write me a song =p....
ttul
love yas hugs