yea....

Listening to: none
Feeling: popular
yea tell me whatcha think and yea yea i know harder and bother dont really rhyme deal with it Untitled I hate the way you changed me with ur honesty The way you act with your no shit policy You make me feel so isolated To the point where I want to be sedated Sometimes I hate you so Forcing me to let you go So I can sit here glaring at you harder Wondering why i even bother Knowing I just wanna be your girl But it seems impossible in our world And now you think your cool Cuz you treated me like a fool I stupidly give you my heart Then you tear my world apart Now I'm afraid to care Because of the damage you have put there
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very good

[Anonymous]

omg that rocks!! gah i wish i could write like that! libby that is apsolutly amazing! i just hope its not a true story... :/ but the poety, wow. elizibith i luuuuuuuuuurve you and your wonderfull writing

[Anonymous]

awww that is really goood!!! :: reads jealousily:: lol. but really , that is a really great poem. keep writing.

[Anonymous]

hey! that's really good! :D i can't write poems for shit... is jelous :P


xoxo

-xLatinTearzx

[Anonymous]

thankyou i sorta do.

[Anonymous]

wow your layouy confuses me at times hehe nice poem :)

[Anonymous]

Some of the best poems don't rhyme. I like this one, its pretty cool.


And, dude, I think my ego pulsed at that comment.

Heh, I'm such a comment whore.

Thanks!