Listening to: avenged sevenfold-i wont see you tonight part 2
Feeling: lousy
a poem i wrote, tell me what you all think of it please.
i just want to cut every inch of me
then sit and watch as i bleed
watch as i drift away
to a place i wont be sad
sweet suicide will save me
'cause no one else is helping
can you tell me why not?
im silently calling to each one of you
but you'll never hear
now i've got my weapon in my hand
and i drag it across my skin
pushing down hard
making sure i get this right
i don't want to be hear any longer
"i don't want to be hear any longer" I know exactly how you feel. Okay, maybe not exactly.. i'm not sure which word to use to describe your poem... but I guess all I can say is that i can relate to it...
hey, i think it's good. Anything that expresses how u feel and gets your emotions out is good. take care. bye.
I love these type of poems that just describe cutting. Or suicide. It makes me think "Other people go though this." And i think it makes me stronger.
I like that poem, it has style. Keep it coming!
yeah, it's a very good poem, and it will mean alot to people, like me and yourself, I'll add you to my friends list then you can read a poem of mine if you want and are okay with that????
joanna XxX [FadedSoul]
woow. . your messed up. . .Alot of peole dont have food, and they are still happy. You need SERIOUS reality check. . you messed up in the head