Forsaken

Feeling: alright
Abashed to the winds For I have sinned My clothes tattered My stance staggered My body worn My spirit broken and torn I merely wait to die so I can die, to be reborn I feel the void surpassing me Like a meaningless entity All that will be left is a shell For unto the darkness I fell No matter how much I try to yell Noone cane hear me, as my body grows stale
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whee.. that was deep o.o

inxden1al

[Anonymous]

thanks. =D


-squirrel

[Anonymous]

conceited* is how you spell it correctly. jackass.


and its not conceited. if you dont comprehend a sentence then dont comment on it.


it must suck to be dumb.

[Anonymous]

That's really deep....did you write that?


*~~Marisa~~*
[Anonymous]

thanks. hahah.


-callie.

it's beautiful.

xx.


[Anonymous]

Wee poem! Good poem. I like.

awesome poem. you r such a good poet.

[Anonymous]

i miss you tigris.



  • cantaloupeenthusiast

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