i've placed it.
i feel inferior and insecure.
in too many ways.
i think i'll just go to sleep.
_________________daybreak__________________________
i feel mostly better now. still kinda dizzy, but who cares i just had sex on a porch.
[12:17 AM]
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and so she spins and crashes
try not to hate me
when i tear your tongue from her throat
try not to hate me
when i hold your eyes in my tight fist
don't hate me when i shove them into my pocket
if you want to read the rest of this poem.
[two and a half]
12:25-28 AM
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there is nothing better than to tease and be teased.
as soon as he gets out of the shower i'm jumping him.
then again, maybe i won't.
but i'm fucking horny.
and i love not having sex. because self-denial can be just as good as self-indulgence.
[three]
11:17 AM
YOU DICKFACE
I WAS READING THAT
before you made it blank.
i was enjoying it too.
elite toga queen, sign on aim, what's your SN?
secretadmirer
hi. :-)
I'll read the rest, but this is enough for me. unless of course you meant to do more. sorry for superimposition.
no, i meant the 'i' is what makes it great. great name.
and no, it's not bad.
yeah, i don't know which i liked better i mean. The whole thing together or just that first verse.
I went there and that poem is amazing. Bravo!
lauren
You have got to be kidding..im not blowing smoke up your ass when I say this...you are great...lots of people should be able to read your poems...they connect with all types of people in all different circumstances and thats special...I signed in to tell you this so im definitly being true.
lauren
haha that last line was awesome- you are an awesome writer. sex on a porch- good day then. rock on.
i want to marry you too!@!!!!
It's ok it happens to the best of us.
I hope everythings ok.