Listening to: Smile empty soul - All my problemz
Feeling: blue
You have a voice.
You have a choice.
So stand up,
And make some
Noise.
You have a spirit.
So dont you fear it.
Go out and share it.
And let them hear it.
You have a right
To chose your
Fight....
You are
So amazing.
Your outta sight.
LOL itz kinda gay
Coment on my poemz thnxx
~TRISH
I get the idea, but I think it is too short and rhyme-ish. Maybe you should make the lines longer? :-/
i like it..its alrite..it rymes alot though but for teh most part pretty good =D
Thats pretty cool.
yeah for sure!
its cool
lol its not gay at all its cute it sounds like a cheer that we use to do
What do you mean gay? More like Super thanks for asking! or Fabulous! lol... no really! it's ok