Listening to: The all american rejectz- Move along
Feeling: moodless
I thought of dying
gazing into the black seductive ice water
so glassy and so tranquil
I thought of dying
but in my place
Deaths bony embrace
clutched listless children
gnawed by hunger
prisoners on death row
detritus of their own childhoods
poor shepherds grazing blunt-toothed animals
on landmined hillsides
I thought of dying
to throw myself away
so much landfill
If its no use to me
I could give it
I can holler with my lungs
at injustice
join hands in protest
at brutality
I realized that I had long been dead
but I could choose instead
to reawake
and be alive for them
coment plzz
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YOU'VE BEEN HIT WITH MY SEXY BUNNY!! which means you either sound hawt or look hawt!! congradulations!!
Hey, love the poems... they're pretty kool in my opinion... much love
XtinaYou have awesome taste in music, though I could do without the AC/DC.. oh well. Your poems are amazing too. As a fellow poet, I leave you this advise... "If you will it, it will happen. If you wish it, it will come true. If it makes you cry, write about it, but that doesn't make the pain go away." These are my words to you. Do right by them.
You are REALLY good hun! You hav such a wonderful talent!
:)
good, yet juvenile. focus on other things but self pity and sadness, i mean like rage anger lust and loathing... there are so many other emotions!
yea i like ur stuff. writing poems when your in a weird mood, angry, sad, whatever, can bring out stuff that you want to say that you never thought you had in you. good stuff. i like :)
nice peoms i wish i had a tanlent in something lol