Listening to: 3 dayz grace - home
Feeling: ambitious
Stereotypes painted across the world
Brainwashed the newborns for national security
Take away their purity to install fake
Patriotic men to discriminate minority...
The system
Our holy system
Evil is pronounced yet the angels declare war
Blood spilled for a gallon of oil
Men killed for the land of sand
While Head of morons play monopoly toys
The system
Our holy system
Debt drowned the future generation
We have to pay for someone else sin
No job available for rainbow union
While majority gets the best skin
The system
Our holy system
We try
We burn
We fight
We suffocate
In this system
In our holy system
coment plzz
nice poem
wow thast really good lol i like it a lot keep writting =]
-Andi
no problem,its ok
nice poem, true shit right there.
[luvablelushh]
srry just realized im not logged in :P
well i found the ABCB rhythm a little bit derivative, but you still managed to portray the emotions that i believe you intended to convey very well.
sorry, the last comment was mine and was intended for the poem before this one.
o and btw u probly shouldn't listen to me, i'm definitely no poet. that was just me trying to sound smart (though it still stands as my opinion)
lol netime.
Wow I really like your poems...I know exactly what you mean...I pray all the time for these exact problems...your poem is beautiful keep writing and send me copies...DeCenter5534@aol.com.....God bless
do you already have the code for the cursor?
if you do juts put it in your header info
-+-Lauren-+-
i really like yours to i luv the song Mr.Brightside!! ♥Lex
which moving words? in the entry list? I just go <marquee>then i write the words here... just take the *'s out
Reflection of our times eh? I know what you mean. Part of the problem is that while all nations have the same problems, the men of each nation will fight to prove that theirs is better.
The truth is that were all wrong, just in different ways.
Reflection of our times eh? I know what you mean. Part of the problem is that while all nations have the same problems, the men of each nation will fight to prove that theirs is better.
The truth is that were all wrong, just in different ways.
ok WOW... This one's fantastic.