#10

by tomorrowstrish
Feeling: asleep
i cannot see you thru cast of stone therez no reflection im now alone now i cannot see you glazing bac no one to judge me or atack im free of me your free of me youll no loner be... my worse enemy... ive been hard on you youve been hard on me lessonz learn now... now set me free mirror mirror on the wall in shardz of glass my past will fall.. coment plzz
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i love your poems you should keep writing there exceletent =D


JACKIE

wow... i think it's <b>amazing</b>... i could never write something like that, so i applaud you!


keep up the kick ass work!


[alexis]

its awesome... wow i could never write something like that.... muchos rep for u

wow.. i really like that :) keep up the awsome work!!! ill be checking back~

Trisha those are really good... smiles keep it up ^^.

your really good at this :P skitso :P


[Anonymous]

umm this is good I love the end of it that was clever

Good work with giving this one a symmetrical look, in more than one way. I can mostly relate to what you were saying in this one, though the ending leaves me curious - which can be a good thing.