Listening to: The Used -All tht ive got
Feeling: lousy
To whom it may concern
Red is pretty
So is blue
I didnt know which to use to write to you
My life was short
And now my spirit is free
I cut myself loose
from my misery
I was lonely and hurt too
I didnt know who to turn to
Have a little faith they say
But faith didnt go a long way
I was confused and didn't understand
I just wanted someone to hold my hand
To help me through my rough times
To stop me from committing such a crime
My wasted youth is now gone.
But there are others who are not strong
So please look and see
That theyll need help just like me
coment plzz
very true
i like ur poem/quote. its real good. did u make it urself?
Neennot bad, dunno why my opinion should mean much. i admire the part about free spirit. however i disagree with wasted youth (judging based on your age as listed on your site). youth cannot be wasted because it is our experiences in youth that make us who we will become. nothings ever wasted, at least i like to think so ;)
peace,
rawt
Very nice poem!
Very nice!! i luv it!! that is amazing how u can come up with that! good job! it is fantasic!
Sophie
your poems are pro...keep it up
gives you props
that is beautiful
ahhh i love your poems! they are so...
GOOD! :)
[luvablelushh]
hey hey im goin away(just thought i'd let ya know) read my entry to see where
omfg i love your poem!!! it is pretty damn awsome...yupp..its kool..AND I LOVE YOUR BACKROUND IT IS SO CUTE =d
your very welcome =D
i don't really understand why you run all over the site asking people to read your poems. all you want is for people to tell you it's a great poem and that you're a fabulous writer.
the poem is weak. there's no structure. very cliche content. weak analogies. sometimes that works, but not here. it's like a sad-sorry-emo poem on crack.
you're just like everybody else.